rough cut of our film - Withheld

Here is our rough cut of our film withheld, all round the film turned out successful. However, there are quite a few tweaks we can do to improve the film.

I felt these shots needed some serious tweaking:

• The introductory shot i felt come in too soon.
• The rest of the media class didn't like the shaking on the camera during the scream, however we have explained that it is purposeful.
• The lighting changes were way too dramatic, the volume of sound was also way too loud overpowering any background noise.
• The last call also had to be taken out as it was way too long.